25 Oct '12

A Nix Review of Male Erotica : While She Watches by Kenny Wright (4.5 Stars)

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Cara has always wanted to watch her boyfriend Nick have sex with her best friend, Elise. When Nick wins a date with Elise in a charity auction, on the instructions of Cara, she sees this as an opportunity to set up her fantasy. Elise is a very attractive woman; it doesn’t take much to convince Nick that her fantasy could become a reality. When she starts to mention Elise in her dirty talk in the bedroom, it becomes clear that Nick is as up for it as she is. Well, he is in the land of make-believe because he realises that if they make it a reality it could change the relationship he values for just one night of pleasure.

Convincing Nick is one problem she feels she can overcome. Convincing her best-friend is another. Can she coerce the two people she loves the most to do this and will it be worth it in the end?

This is Erotica for men written by a man. Kenny and I have had many conversations, when I first started to get review requests for the EC for men line, over what Erotica for men should look like. Let’s be honest, I am missing a particular appendage that makes my opinion on the matter not incredibly relevant J  Do I recommend that men buy this novella? Do I think women should load up their men’s kindle with this type of Erotica? In a word, YES! This is a well written story that even managed to make me hot and it wasn’t even aimed at my gender!

There are obvious differences in this to erotica for women. At no point did I see the size/girth of Nicks penis mentioned. I did, however, get quite a bit of description of the women but without any flowery euphemisms. I got a lot of positions, but with less thoughts/feelings/laboured descriptive terms. It was refreshing. The storyline was straight out of a man’s fantasy land; we have a male being given permission to have sex with his girlfriends hot best friend, then some lesbian sex and to finish it all we have a F/MF threesome. It’s fun.

There was character development over the length of the novella and all characters were well fleshed out for a tale this size. Elise was probably the vaguest of all the characters but this wasn’t her tale; this was the tale of Nick and Cara and them accepting each other warts, kinks and all!

This is what I imagine Erotica for men to look like. I can’t comment on the effectiveness of it in arousing men, but I thought the tale was hot and was very well written. It’s something that’s definitely worth a try.



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2 Responses to “A Nix Review of Male Erotica : While She Watches by Kenny Wright (4.5 Stars)”

  1. I’m glad you enjoyed the story, and I love your comments. Very thought-provoking. While I do write with a male audience in mind, I don’t think the divisions are that clear cut. I like to think that there’s something for all genders. But for the sake of female readers, I’ll include more size/girth descriptions of cocks in future efforts!

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